Just wanna share my experience


The next example of motivation statement (with some changes) was provided by the author for me to be distributed. Hopefully be helpful.


NAME: Brama Kumbara

COUNTRY: Madangkara

PROGRAMME: Master of Science in Advance Mathematics, Harvard University


First I would like to express my appreciation for this opportunity to apply for XXX scholarship. I am a graduate of Mojopahit University holding a degree in Mathematics Science, First Class Honours.

With the background knowledge I have in mathematics, I strongly feel that a master course in Advance Mathematics will be very relevant to my practice back here in my country Madangkara. I plan to work with research based groups in applied mathematics sector as well as in local universities with an aim to improve research and human resource capacity building through training.

Owing to limited resources, I have not been able to proceed with further studies here in Madangkara or elsewhere as I lack the necessary funds. I would be grateful to be provided with sponsorship to further my education and build a career and XXX scholarship will be immensely helpful. My future potential employer especially in the public sector such as local universities and research organisations will be a good channel where I can transfer the knowledge gained in an optimized manner to my country and future generations.

In addition I will get a chance through XXX scholarship to interact with students from diverse professional and cultural backgrounds drawn from all over the world. The exposure is important for interaction and integration of diverse ideas and perspectives pertaining to various global issues; for the world is a mosaic of different cultures and a single perspective cannot apply in all these cultures.

Finally I am determined to make the most out of the scholarship benefits. I will optimize my stay at Harvard University to garner a wealth of ideas that will apply when I return to my country and at the same time contribute to a better Harvard University and the Americans with my country Madangkara.

Once again I am grateful for considering my application and I look forward to a favorable reply.

February 14, 2009 - Posted by | education, Scholarship | , ,


  1. i hope u dont mind if i take this to consider and addition in my motivation letter. Thanks be4

    Comment by andri | April 22, 2009 | Reply

    • sure

      Comment by Tio | April 23, 2009 | Reply

      • This piece is so helpful. My eyes are open now! It’s all about selling yourself to your sponsors.

        Comment by Esther | June 17, 2013

  2. Good attitude for being a teacher because of your willingness to share with others.
    Good Luck.!

    Comment by Marlyn | May 18, 2009 | Reply

  3. thanks for sharing this motivation letter…

    banda aceh, indonesia

    Comment by hikmat | June 25, 2009 | Reply

  4. Thank you so much for this useful motivation letter. please pray for me to win the PhD position at the University of Aarhus.

    Comment by Leila, Iran | July 20, 2009 | Reply

    • Hi Leila, Insya Allah you got the best for you. Salam…

      Comment by Tio | July 20, 2009 | Reply


    Comment by NATHNAEL TSEGAYE WELDEMESKEL | September 18, 2009 | Reply



    Comment by NATHNAEL TSEGAYE WELDEMESKEL | September 18, 2009 | Reply

  7. thanks for sharing this motivation letter..it inspired me to make my motivation letter for erasmus mundus… pray for me please ūüėČ (btw..could you give me explanation what is first class honours?) thanks…

    Comment by henriette | October 1, 2009 | Reply

  8. hai..thanks a lot for this letter…wish you can share another your experience to me…especially how to get scholarship in abroad

    Comment by ika | October 23, 2009 | Reply

  9. u can’t know how much u helped me. this is a very good Initiative, if evryone in this was like u….thanks you very much

    Comment by jeff | December 17, 2009 | Reply

  10. thx for your information… bay the way i had plan for join scholarship to australi but i dont know anything about how to apply scholarship n how to make letter of statement, motivation, about proposal and many more. would you want help me about it?
    its my pleasure if u want apply my post to my email dinda_cesaria@yahoo.com

    thank you so much..

    _dinda cesaria_

    Comment by dinda | February 11, 2010 | Reply

  11. indeed we all have to share what we have for other to use

    Comment by godfred | June 16, 2010 | Reply

  12. i hope i will get a scholarship if i use it properly

    Comment by Sisay Semere | July 15, 2010 | Reply

  13. boleh jd referensi yaaaaa ūüôā

    Comment by eka | September 30, 2010 | Reply

    • silahkan

      Comment by Tio | October 7, 2010 | Reply

  14. thank you a lot,this is what i really need to write a motivation letter. i have to use it to as a guide line to identify what are include in the motive’ letter
    i find it useful

    Comment by ab | October 18, 2010 | Reply

  15. Dear Brama

    Thank you very much for sharing such a well developed motivation letter. It helped me a lot when writing a scholarship letter.

    Many blessings


    Comment by Lil Mooks | December 20, 2010 | Reply

  16. i am applying for masters in mechanical and manufacturing engineering.pls i need a motivational statement for this field

    Comment by efe | January 18, 2011 | Reply

  17. thanks for such development. i promise you this has helped many youth out there to gain scholarships. thanks for the good work done.

    Comment by kuyateh | February 8, 2011 | Reply

  18. i am in process to apply for Full bright scholarship for masters degree in environmental science but i am not satisfied with my personal essay, application and motivation letter! can you please help me

    Comment by anita | March 1, 2011 | Reply

    • Hi Anita, Sorry I cant help you with that…you can customize this motivation letter..

      Comment by Tio | March 29, 2011 | Reply

  19. Currently i have B.Com Accounting option and i want to progress with masters degree iin business administration. Please anyone help me to know how i can get scholarship. I have a letter of offer from University of Nairobi, kenya and no funds. please anyone help me progress with my studies. thanks

    Comment by Gideon Muinde | March 30, 2011 | Reply

  20. Please, anyone help on how to do a motivational letter on area of masters in business administration.

    Comment by Gideon Muinde | March 30, 2011 | Reply

  21. your english is great… I wish I could write motivation letter like you …

    Comment by azka | April 12, 2011 | Reply

    • thankx, you will

      Comment by Tio | June 1, 2011 | Reply

  22. I am from Ghana and have graduated from the U niversity for Development Studies with first class honours in Development Planning and Rural Development. I want help to persue masters in Health Planning and Management. Can contact me on +233 245898708/Asco.live@yahoo.com

    Comment by Seiba Issifu | April 18, 2011 | Reply

  23. I am grateful for this letter since it has given insight on how to go about my own. God bless u

    Comment by Philip | July 1, 2011 | Reply

  24. thank you for showing me way on how to do these things. its great!!!!

    Comment by Zainab Mziray | August 18, 2011 | Reply

  25. Ur motivation lettr helped me 2 write mine….thnx 4 sharing it:)

    Comment by Breanna | October 7, 2011 | Reply

  26. Ur motivation lettr was very helpful in guiding me 2 write mine….thnx 4 sharing it:)

    Comment by Breanna | October 7, 2011 | Reply

  27. this is gonna help me enormously….thank you very much. However, if I copy paste this is there any chance that the authority would realize this or what if more than one person use this as their motivation letter!!

    Comment by T | November 11, 2011 | Reply

  28. This letter was very very helpful for me. Thank you!

    Comment by mr motivating life guy | November 24, 2011 | Reply

  29. It has been so helpful to me

    Comment by Baba Eugene | December 19, 2011 | Reply

  30. thanks for the great job you are doing, your motivation letter has been a very good guide for me.

    Comment by Sally | January 5, 2012 | Reply

  31. A great motivation letter.
    This gives me the idea how to write my motivation letter.
    Thank you very much.

    Comment by rianru | January 31, 2012 | Reply

  32. i like this

    Comment by saara | February 10, 2012 | Reply

  33. thanks a lot for shearing that .

    Comment by ilhom | February 28, 2012 | Reply

  34. A good teacher teaches by example.
    Thank you for this great boost

    Comment by Sandhya | March 14, 2012 | Reply

    • Thanks

      Comment by Tio | March 15, 2012 | Reply

  35. thanks a lot for this. it really helped me.

    Comment by Kwaku | April 5, 2012 | Reply

  36. hahaha very good yu give me good idea

    Comment by edwards | April 11, 2012 | Reply

  37. thanks you very much!

    Comment by H∆įng | May 28, 2012 | Reply

  38. Thank you most sincerely. I am greatly inspired. I will share this with whoever needs it!

    Comment by Joy | October 1, 2012 | Reply

  39. Excelent

    Comment by Solomon | December 30, 2012 | Reply

  40. Great, wish you good luck ūüôā

    Comment by Bakhtawar | January 11, 2013 | Reply

  41. This piece is so helpful. My eyes are open now! It’s all about selling yourself to your sponsors.

    Comment by Esther | June 17, 2013 | Reply

  42. […] Salah satu syarat yang sangat penting dan kadang menjadi kendala bagi pelajar dari Indonesia adalah¬†motivation statement, dua tautan berikut memberikan illustrasi¬†motivation statement¬†yang diperlukan dalam proses¬†screening¬†beasiswa terutama untuk beasiswa program Master (S2):¬†A Sample of MOTIVATION STATEMENT for Master¬†Scholarship dan¬†Another MOTIVATION FOR APPLYING FOR A SCHOLARSHIP¬†Sample. […]

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