A Sample of MOTIVATION STATEMENT for Master Scholarship
Berikut contoh motivation statement yang pernah saya buat.
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MOTIVATION STATEMENT
Since I was in Senior High School, I have believed that mathematics is an important factor in a life. All human activities in several fields such as information technology, economics, physics, social and others will run well if they are cited in a good mathematics framework. This circumstance stimulated me to attend faculty of mathematics and natural science. I choose statistics as my specialization even though at this time, there weren’t many people know about statistics and few students choose statistics as their specialization. I saw in several developed countries such as The Netherlands and Belgium, the mathematics degree-holders not only have many opportunities but also were cited as important scholar in their societies.
As a student at XXXX Department faculty of XXX of XXX University, I had numerous opportunities to do many activities. From XXX to XXX I had chances to become a lecturer assistant in mathematics and statistics laboratory. My resposibilities are taught and supervised students in the following subjects; Basic Programming, Computational Statistics, Statistical Methods and XXX.
Besides studying, I was active in the student senate and became the head of research and development division. In XXX I, in a team, became the third winner of Indonesian student research competition. Overall I am pleased with my academic record and I believe that it has prepared me very well for graduate school.
Presently, I work as a XXX for XXX. My responsibilities are teaching, conducting research individually or in a team and etc (mention your responsibilities)…… Working as a statistics lecturer needs deep knowledge of fundamental mathematics and experiences in advanced research of applied statistics. Even though my undergraduate programme has given me a strong background in the fundamentals of various mathematics especially statistics, this is not enough for me to be a professional lecturer. I have to continue my study to enrich my skills and broaden my knowledge.
Currently, our institution which one of the functions is to XXXX to the government of Indonesia, has formulated its Long Term Plan known as the XXX PLAN, which directed toward the establishment of the Integrated National XXX System. This plan is including the development of statistics in various fields such as economy, demography, agriculture, and health. It leads the need of statistician who expert in those fields. Today, there is no Master of Science in XXX in our institution. These circumstances persuade me to apply Master of Science in XXX under XXX Scholarship programme.
Master of Science in XXX is needed in Indonesia because of the following reasons:
- It will improve education in XXX and Indonesia in general, and strenghten the establishment of the Integrated National System
- I will fill the masters of XXX scarcity and strengthen the sustainable development of Indonesia.
Considering all factors above. I believe that the chosen study will benefit Indonesia in general
I consider myself to be a good candidate for XXX Scholarship because I am young, energetic, hardworking, visionary, and motivated person who believes that I can do something for the benefit of my country to whom I have been working. I did my best with all maximum efforts I could give for my institution. But this is not enough. Frankly, I am not satisfied yet with what I did. I believe that I can do much better if I am trained and developed through a master of science in Belgium.
Berikut bbrp link ttg contoh2: Statement of purpose, Motivation statement:
http://www.studential.com/personalstatements/default.asp
http://www.statementofpurpose.com/whatis.html
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Pak apakah ada bedanya antara motivation letter dan Statement of purpose? Terus apa yang dimaksud Personal statement, bisa diberikan contoh pak karena kebetulan saya pengin masukin scholarship yang pakai keduanya dalam waktu dekat pak.ajika bapak berkenan bisa dikirimkan jawaban di email saya itu
thank you so much…it,s very useful for me…
Hallo Mas/Bp Tio
Makasih yah contoh motivation statement nya kebetulan sy lagi butuh banget nih…..:)
Wah, trima ksh bgt pak tio, infonya..kebetulan sy mau apply jg dan sedang cari beasiswa buat jurusan design furniture/interior..mungkin bapk punya informasi?tq
Makasih banget. Share pengalaman yang lain dunk, masa2 apply master ke LN. Blog saya bisa ditaut ndak di blognya Bang Tio.
terima kasih atas contohnya =)
makasih yah buat motivation letternya…
of course..it will be useful..
thank u so much
Hey,
Did anyone ever read this book? Winning a sports scholarship.
Terima kasih atas contohnya..
Thank you very much, Pak Tio.
Insya Allah ini informasi yang sangat saya butuhkan untuk apply scholarship…
Makasih infonya ya. Selamat berburu scolarship buat kita semua.
Dear Pak Tio..
Thank for the sample of statement of purpose you’ve written. It’s invaluable input for me.. At this moment, i’m applying scholarship. Would you like to inform me anything regarding to this issue?
Best Regards,
Rusminah
blh jg ni contoh motivation letter nya…copy ahhh….sapa taw berguna nanti… ^^
thanks ya pak…
hatur nuhun pisan, thanks a lot…
motivation statemennya sangat berguna
matur nuwun..
pasti bermanfaat..
thank you so much, i hope it will be helpful for me and motivate me. I hope my dream will be come true..amin
danke schön, y Pak..
Thank you so much it is helping me so much. Thank u very very much
mas tio yth.., apakah boleh berkomunikasi langsung..?! please reply me at: bruderhonk@gmail.com
dank u wel,
bruder
My resposibilities are taught and supervised students in the following subjects:
should be:
My responsibilities are to teach and to supervise students in the following subjects
thanks a lot!Yours essay template helped me alot!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks a lot for your well structured and brief sample letter.I hope it will help me.
makasih banget … lagi desperately seeking letter of motivation atau yg sejenisnya… semoga berpahala
hello friend,
thank you very much, I appreciate your sample of letter of motivation, its great, actaully im going to apply for a admition for the university of webster, I don’t know if they accept me , but i will seem if you have any comment on this please let me know, im from Ethiopia,
this kind of sample is really helpful to every student desiring to win a scholarship but confused as regards the style of motivation.
fantastic! I am also applying for a Belgian Bilateral Scholarship!!!!
fantastic! I am also applying for a Belgian Bilateral Scholarship!!!!
Fantastic! You have made life easy for many. God Bless you
Vielen dank!!!
very helpfull, thanks pak! ^_^
I have got trouble in how to write motivation letter for scholarship.
would you please send me sample letters of motivation for erasmus mundus scholarship in applied ecology through my e-maile.lycomenza@yahoo.com
that is a wonderful motivation letter. it was indeed helpful to me. all the best
i’m a little bit confused on how to write a motivation letter for erasmus mundus scholarship in Management of Information Technology.Would you please send me a sample motivation letter.
Miki
i’m a little bit confused on how to write a motivation letter for erasmus mundus scholarship in Management of Information Technology.Would you please send me a sample motivation letter through mailtomiko@gmail.com
Thank you
Mm
thank you so much,your letter has helped me tremendously,much appreciated.
Wah, terima kasih nih Pak. Lagi butuh mau bikin buat persyaratan beasiswa.
so interesting SOP.
could you seend me sample SOP
to apply for Eplsrusmus mundes scholarship
particularly in computational logic
thank u very much.
Dear Boss Tio,
First thing i want to ask you, is Erasmus Mundus scholarship use such a kind of reimbursement fund, especially for international travel? So we shall not receive any amount of money just after we arrive in host University or at least country?
please let me know…! If we are approved for the scholarship, can we ask some of the money to be paid in advance just for airplane fare and any travel cost of our departure to the host country/university?
Thank you very much in advance anyway for your time and reply, and most of all for your posting of your motivation statement.It helps us a lot..many greetings !! dan Salam kenal..:) please reply me thorug email
It’s perfect motivation letter!
I liked it a lot!
thanks a lot pak..sangat berguna
Jazakallahu khairan katsira
Pak Tio…
Wah ini blognya bermanfaat banget…
Aku lagi bingung nyari contoh SoP buat Master di Interior Design…please send me if you have an example…
Tengkyu berat…
Mas Tio..
takutnya panitia beasiswa kebingungan kok format tulisannya sama semua. hehehe
Hati2 lho teman2, pernah kejadian karena format tulisan yg sama, 2 kandidat penerima beasiswa dibatalkan.
So be careful if u guys want to copy this letter
Yup ..I agree..don’t just copy and paste…………
ok mantaplah motivasinya
मलाई निकै खुशी लाग्यो
I confused, b’coz I didn’t know how to write that.Finally I got it. That’s the thing that I was trying to see. Thak you very much!
Mas..saya kopi ya..
and saya ksih ke temen2 sy yang lain boleh ya…
makasih mas, smoga ilmunya bermanfaat..
NN
thank you for the statement. Please why don’t you do one for a professional job?
Wah ini manthap skali, boleh dicopy yah mas…. buat referensi pengajuan beasiswa. Thnx
thank you very much pal.i hope it works well for me.God bless you.you have enlightened me on that!
the motivation letter was good but a little confusing. Could you please send me a sample motivation letter to aplly on any scholarship program in management sciences?
Hi, I am sorry I dont have that one
Hi, Guys am also a post graduate student at the university of Nairobi,Kenya.
Also searching for sponsors to fund me in persueing the program.Pls advice accordingly if you know one.I will be very grateful
Terima kasih ya, jd terinspirasi…
Really appreciate it
Thanks banget ya
Inilah yg sangat gw butuhkan
Asslm Bapak Tio,
terima kasih atas sample motivation letter-nya..saya nyotek banyak niy..kalo bapak ada waktu, saya minta toleng di koreksi motivation letter yang saya sertakan ini..apa udah oke atau belum ?
saya berencana untuk melamar beasiswa DAAD tahun ini..
terima kasih lagi saya haturkan kepada Bapak…
Padang, 1st August 2009
Name : Fairuz Hayatus Syafari
Country : Indonesia
Programme : Master of Public Policy, Erfurt School of Public Policy ( ESPP )
Dear Sir or Madam,
First, I would like to express my appreciation for this opportunity to apply DAAD Master’s Scholarship for PPGG.
Second, since I was in Elementary School, I really want to study in Germany after I read BJ Habibie’s Biography. After graduated Senior High School, I continued my study while have to work as I lack the necessary funds. Besides that, I was active in the student senate and become the general secretary of Tamansiswa University’s Senate. In 2002, I become The Fourth Winner Kopertis Wilayah X Sumatera Barat – Riau – Jambi student scientific writing competition. My first job is as Customer Service Staff of Garuda Indonesia Branch Padang, an airline company. My responsibilities was served people in reservation, arranged public relation programmes and conducted research about effective communication in reservation and customers satisfaction.
Presently, I work as an Election Technical Data and Programme Staff of KPU Sumatera Barat Province. My duty are making Yearly Operational Budget Programme (Rencana Kerja Anggaran), conducting administration and letters, collecting election technical data and creating Electoral Technical Presentation Paper since I also became assistance of Coordinator Technical Division of KPU (National Election Commissioner) Sumatera Barat Province. As my desired position became KPU General Secretary in Jakarta, I have to continue my study to enrich my skills and broaden my knowledge.
Third, our institution which one of the function is conducting electoral management in Indonesia that still searching for the establish formula to arrange an election. KPU is the newest institution in Indonesia. It leads the need of policy maker who expert in those field. Today, there is no Master of Public Policy in our secretariat. These circumstances persuade me to apply Master Public Policy in Germany under DAAD Master’s Scholarship for PPGG 2010 – 2011 programme.
I consider my self to be a good candidate for Master Public Policy in ESPP because I am young, energetic, hardworking, visionary, and motivated person who believes that I can do something for the benefit of my country to whom I have been working. I did my best with all maximum efforts I could give for my institution. But this is not enough. Frankly, I am not satisfied yet with what I did. I believe that I can do much better if I am trained and developed through a Master of Public Policy in Germany.
Once again, I am grateful for considering my application and I look forward to a favorable reply.
Yours faithfully,
Fairuz Hayatus Syafari
Apakah Pak Tio memiliki contoh format CV untuk STUNED? Kalau ada bisakah saya mendapatkannya dari Bapak. Hal ini terjadi, karena link : http://neso.nuffic.nl/indonesia/indonesian-students/information-in-english/scholarships/stuned/download-application-forms di bagian CV Formatnya tidak bisa diakses alias error.
Saya membutuhkannya untuk melakukan aplikasi STUNED di thn 2010 ini, saya tinggal di luar P. Jawa jadi saya mengejar untuk bisa memasukkan aplikasi sebelum 31 Agustus 2009.
Kalau berkenan mohon kirim ke email saya di Lekopr@gmail.com
Salam hormat,
eko
Halo Eko, bisa contoh CV bisa di dapatkan di: http://europass.cedefop.europa.eu/europass/home/vernav/Europasss+Documents/Europass+CV.csp
Halo Pak Tio, salam kenal…
Thanks banget untuk contoh motivasinya. BTW, biasanya kalau beasiswa kan butuh Letter of Reference, biasanya surat ini dibuat langsung oleh si “dosen/orang di tempat kerja” atau kita yang buat sendiri isinya, terus nanti tinggal ditandatangani saja oleh “dosen/orang di tempat kerja” terebut???
Thanks
Salam Kenal juga Mba Erna,
Seharusnya surat referensi dibuat oleh sang referee dan diberikan ke kamu dlm amplop tertutup atau dikirimkan langsung ke yg memerlukan. Namun biasanya di Indonesia, kita yang membuatkan kemudian ditanyakan ke refereenya apakah sudah sesuai isinya jika ternyata sudah lsg di ttd.
Oooo… OK Pak, ternyata emang ‘kebiasaan’ di Indonesia yach
thanks infonya
Hi there , it is really useful letter u posted. Thanks a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u r welcome
Yth Mas Tio,
Salam kenal ya,,, saya heryna. Saat ini saya sedang mencari beasiswa untuk melanjutkan S2. saya berpikir untuk fokus pada satu proposal thesis dan mencari promotor melalui beasiswa yang ditawarkan. yang saya lakukan saat ini mulai meng-email profesor yang sedang melakukan penelitian terkait thesis saya dan mengajukan diri menjadi research assistant. menurut mas bagaimana?
tks,
heryna
Subhanallah..your motivation letter is so wonderful and amazing. Hope I can make such a motivation letter. Wish me luck
Hello,thx alot but i would like u to send m some of the motivation letters/statement written by other people so that i can learn more because i want to apply for admission and a scholarship in the netherlands next year
thx
Doreen
Hi Doreen, I dont have others’ motiv letter..moreover if i have to post it we need permission from the authors…..
i’m a little bit confused on how to write a motivation letter for erasmus mundus scholarship in masters in managment and engineering of enviroment and energy.Would you please send me a sample motivation letter through tesfayeaddis@gmail.com
Thank you
LUAR BIASA MANTAP !!!!!!!!!!!
alhamdulillah
Dear Mas Tio,
Ada sample letter of recommendatio yg boleh saya jadikan acuan buat apply beasiswa ke LN
thx
Hallo Wijaya, yg dimaksuda recommendation letter dr professor?
According to the International Water Management Institute (IWMI 2000) report by 2025 much of the countries subjected to physical water scarcity. In addition climate change and global Warming will crate fresh water shortage. These challenges lead me to think how to integrate our water and natural resources, how to consider effective use of water in design, and how to optimize the available water resources in an evolving water and energy market. Allocation of limited water resources between agricultural, municipal and environmental uses now requires the full integration of supply, demand, water quality and ecological considerations. In addition, knowledge of the art and science of modeling and understanding the results from modeling helps in developing water management policies and strategies. Hydro informatics and water management Masters Program at EURO-AQUAE provides me with an opportunity to better study the basic knowledge and skill to improve the challenges of water in an evolving water and energy market.
While most of my previous academic training has dealt with water, environmental and hydrological engineering, I decided to enroll in the Hydro informatics and water management program because it allows a blending of areas of interest to me. I realize that I can acquire more knowledge and experience in the areas of integrated water management. I expect to achieve this through the Erasmus program, as well as a better sense of their successful use in different countries. My intentions and expectations are to improve my understanding of hydro informatics and water management and to meet great people with similar interests.
In addition I will get a chance through EURO-AQUAE scholarship to interact with students from diverse professional and cultural backgrounds drawn from all over the world. The exposure is important for interaction and integration of diverse ideas and perspectives pertaining to various global issues; for the world is a mosaic of different cultures and a single perspective cannot apply in all these cultures.
Hydro informatics and water management studies include inter-sector water allocation in river basins, productivity of water use efficiency, and multiple uses of water for agriculture and in operation and maintenance of irrigation structures, all of which are now major challenges for many countries. If I get the chance to participate in this program, I will be able to develop the skills and knowledge that must be involved during the design of any water resource structure for sustainable development. I believe the failure of most hydraulic structures and projects has been in part due to the lack of cooperation of other disciplines and the community in all phases. Hence, I believe that my interest and background provide me with solid preparation to study Hydro informatics and water management. I would have the opportunity to become a better manager and engineer working to solve water resource problems in socially, economically, and environmentally sound manners.
Dear sir/madam
i already aplied erusmus mundus scholarship program in the field of animal breeding and genetics.so please help me how to write motivation letter or send a sample of motivation letter related to animal science or animal breeding field.send via shimelsee@yahoo.com
thank you for all to help me!!!
shimels.
Hi Shimels,
I am sorry I dont have a motivation letter for a specific field as you asked. Good luck for your application…
Hebat,,makasih mas,, saya sangat butuh ini untuk lanjut s2.. Hidup Indonesia!!
Thanks a lot for your letter of motivation. It’s very useful. I’m applying for HSP scholarship in Holland, for Master’s programme in English language and culture. Are you studying in Holland? Do you have any motivation letter sample in this field? Look forward to hearing from you soon
Hi, Im studying in Belgium now…sorry i dont have motivation letter for that field…
could any concerned person correct the mistakes in this letter for me
NOHA CONSORTIUM OFFICE
SPAIN
Dear Sir / Madam,
LETTER OF MOTIVATION
I write to indicate my interest to pursue NOHA European Master’s in International Humanitarian Action programme. I got to know about this programme when I was surfing the internet for scholarships. After I made some searches about the programme I actually became excited about it because I found out that it has produced professionals holding positions such as project managers, administrators and researchers in national and international organizations.
Fuseini Moses Naiim is my name. I graduated from University for Development Studies (UDS) in Ghana in 2007 with a BA Integrated Development Studies; Second Class Honours (Upper Division). Currently I am pursuing a Diploma in Education from University of Education, Winneba, Ghana. I was the president of Choggu Peace Club in Tamale in 2006.
After first degree, I worked in different organizations (Kpangmaga Development Aid – a local NGO, president of Choggu Peace Club and National Disaster Management Organization) that are into proving humanitarian assistance. At these jobs, I learnt how to enlighten the masses on how to prevent and or reduce disasters, foster peaceful coexistence, appealing for relief for disaster victims and distribution of relief items to disaster victims. These roles have deeply enriched my knowledge in humanitarian action which I hope to build a career (as a consultant) by further pursuing a Master’s in International Humanitarian Action that will enable me to develop an interdisciplinary understanding and comprehensive analysis of conflict and emergency situations, vulnerable situations, to assess consequences of international intervention and programmes of reconstruction and good use of humanitarian relief techniques from practice and analysis of academic concepts.
After researching European universities and courses offered, I have come to the conclusion that the NOHA programme which is run by the seven principal consortiums of universities is the perfect match for my aims. Among several great features of this course is it being an inter-university, multidisciplinary postgraduate programme that provides high quality academic education based on critical thinking and contemporary paradigms and providing professional competencies for personnel working or intending to work in the area of humanitarian action. This programme indeed has already produced graduates that are playing key roles in addressing complex humanitarian emergencies in every corner around the world.
Thank you for considering my application and for your time.
Yours faithfully,
FUSEINI MOSES NAIIM
(+233 243006807/+233 274758596: naiim_toxicbrain@yahaoo.com)
very good it’s impressing for DAAD applicants
wow it is very attractive and interesting
could you send me sample letter of motivation
to apply for Master’s of Computer Science
thanks alot
I am sorry, I dont have that, but you can modify from my post…
Thanks so much for this post, it is so useful.